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Which tense should I choose?

4 January 2018 by Hilary Trick Leave a Comment

Choosing the correct tense for academic writing is not always easy. When you are writing about everyday happenings it’s generally a fairly simple task for native speakers, but not always so if English isn’t your first language. Here are some examples, with the relevant tense shown in brackets:

• What I did a year ago: I went (past simple or simple past) on holiday.
• What I was doing when I did something a year ago: I was learning (past continuous) Spanish when I went on holiday.
• What I was doing before the thing I was doing when something happened a year ago: First I had learned (past perfect) to paraglide, and then I was learning to speak Spanish when I went on holiday.
• What I do repeatedly, or something that is always the case: I go (present simple or simple present) on holiday every year.
• What I am actually doing now: I am travelling (present continuous) to the airport to go on holiday.
• What I will do at some point in the future: I will fly (future) home.
• What you will be doing at some point in the future when something else happens: I will be flying (future continuous) home when you are having your party.

If you are not a native speaker (and perhaps even if you are!) you may find this simple reminder from Oxford Dictionaries useful.

When it comes to academic work it can often be more difficult than in everyday writing to work out which tense to use, particularly for quoting what other researchers have already done, or what you have done in your research. I certainly found this one of the most puzzling aspects of academic editing for the first pieces I worked on. Then I had some ‘light bulb’ moments:

1. The tense can and does change quite frequently, even within one sentence.
2. When reporting either other people’s or your own work, think about the focus of what you are saying – are you reporting on the actual research that was done, or on the results of the research, or on the people who carried out the research or on what the research results mean?
3. If you are reporting on people or events that are the objects of research then you need to match the tense to their actions, rather than to those of the researcher.

As an example, you might have a paragraph such as (all facts invented by me!):

A study carried out (past simple – relates to the research itself) by Bloggs et al. (2002) found (past simple – relates to the research results) that people who had eaten (past perfect – relates to the objects of the research) poor diets as children were catching (past continuous – relates to the objects of the research) more infectious diseases than other people. The authors suggest (present simple – relates to the researchers; alternatively, you could use ‘suggested’ (past simple), particularly if those results have since been superseded by other findings) that this resulted (past simple – relates to the research results) from a lack of essential nutrients in childhood. The present study will investigate (future – relates to the research itself) the impact of childhood diet on adults living (present continuous – relates to the research objects) in a rural village in southern England. Current researchers (Smith, 2016; Jones, 2017) have highlighted (present perfect – relates to the researchers) links to lack of vitamin D in northern latitudes, but do not relate (present simple – relates to the researchers) this to diet in childhood.

You will find a useful printable infographic on the excellent Editage website which you may want to keep handy when you are writing – particularly for literature reviews.

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